Authors note-This poem is about not knowing what you're future ahead of you will be, and I used a road to symbolize someones life.Driving down the road not a person insight
I look out the window at the sun so bright
Where might I be going? I do not know
I hope the road ahead will surely show
Where does the long road end? Up ahead it blurs
I won't know the answer until it occurs
The road traveled behind me is my past
bumps and cracks in it went by slow and fast
What's far ahead of me; I'll have to find out
Choices could be bad, but that, I like to doubt
I may have a ways to go on this road as I go, future is what I'll be showed
I like the way you rhymed in the poem, you rhymed but it didn't make it sound immature. I really like that poem.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the whole concept of the poem! Nice Job!
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with Natalie on the rhyming thing. This piece was really creative and fun to read, but still had a really serious, meaningful point. Great job
ReplyDeleteThe whole idea and form of this poem is really neat. I like how you used the concept of a road and turned it into the life of a person. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThis was really cool! Like Natalie and Allison said the rhyming was great. I also liked the symbolism of a road representing life. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWow, Delaney I love this poem. I can't rhyme for my life, and you accomplished it without making it sound sing-songy. I love it.
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